I hope it is a captivating story... Here is one opinion:
"Thank you for inventing, writing and sharing your short story Captivating Moments. The most beautiful and most shocking sentence is 'Each heart beat meant a moment lost'. What you create is philosophy cast into poetry. This short story is one of the rare pieces of writing that one can read over and over and again after days or years and always find something new. The story is about a tiny cell, written in short sentences, but it opens up endless possibilities to the reader’s mind." Bernd Hendricks (writer), Germany
You can buy the whole magazine or my story only, right here. It's a very interesting magazine, with focus on time.
Oh, and the story fabulously illustrated, too. A painting by Kaj Brady. (Untitled. Acrylic on canvas.) See below.
Did I mention it's also translated into French (Moments Captifs)? It appears in the French version of the magazine, Revue Temps.